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Million Dollar girlfriend

Million Dollar girlfriend

1.3K Reads 7 Votes 1 Part Story
Julia By jules121312 Completed

Carter's Life was great. Until one of her brothers friends, Shawn, asks her to be his hired girlfriends, and everything comes crashing down. She looses one for her best friends Crystal, is set at a cold distance from her brother Matt, and long time crush Sabstian gives up on her. But when everything come crashing down can the new kid Nathan help her put the pieces back together?

lovette lovette Jul 20, 2011
You have a good start i already love your characters but you need to do a spell check other than that i love your story upload soon can't wait.!!!!!!!!! 
xDORKuluss xDORKuluss Jul 20, 2011
Cool plot! I think I can see where you're going with this. 
                              But it's just my assumption, anything could happen. Improvements: Might want to spell check. But good job.
                              And if you have time and don't mind, would you check out my story? You can find it on my page :)
MaryAnnDwy MaryAnnDwy Jul 20, 2011
So far so good. it has a good story line, just might want to run a spellcheck. Cant wait to read more
cords707 cords707 Jul 19, 2011
heya this is really good your story line is good as well, your friend familyguyfan recomended it to me and i am glad he did xxx
StacyKeiblerr StacyKeiblerr Feb 11, 2011
HEY i already read This story
                              I wonder how i did that 
                              well lets just say Its not your story 
                              cant you make your own stuff up