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Fiona By IrresistiblyIrish Updated Apr 17, 2011

Just when you get your life back on track again disaster strikes. Isn't that the way it always happens? You gain something but you lose it almost instantly? Well that happened to me and one day I was perfectly happy living with my mother, the next I was an orphan. I bet you think that that is the worst part but let me tell you that is just the beginning, my life had changed completely and I had no choice but to change along with it and try to fit in with my biological father's family. A man who I might just tell you that I had absolutely no contact with in the entire fifteen years of my life, not one birthday card or nothing. 

Strange thing is though, learning to fit in with those lot was the easy part.
Learning to fit in with myself, we'll that was more difficult than I had ever imagined it would have been.

Angel_Eyes24 Angel_Eyes24 Feb 06, 2011
You just had to end with a cliff hanger huh -_- 
                              Nice beginning, I like it! Well yeah I do. I don't know what else to say about it because it's "just the beginning" ^_^ get it? It's the beginning of ur story and the title......o_O yeah....that was whack! =D well on to the next chapter!!!
- - Feb 06, 2011
Interesting beginning. But watch out for some spelling mistakes. But I liked that you faded off the last sentence, that's a great way to get someone to read the next chapter. I really liked this.
Wallie Wallie Feb 06, 2011
Great start! It really makes me want to read more and find out what she is and what the accident was. Keep up the good work!
rkhosp rkhosp Feb 04, 2011
A very good beginning! It leaves the reader wanting to know more... Good job!
raiddyrox raiddyrox Feb 04, 2011
WHAT IS SHE!! WHAT WAS THE ACCIDENT! wow short beginning and im already hooked
                              o and if you guys have the time try and read my story
Chocolateroxz-DTV Chocolateroxz-DTV Feb 04, 2011
Its AMAziNG it makes me curious so im going to read on. WHAT IS SHE!!!!!!