Forever Is Over

Forever Is Over

2.2K Reads 48 Votes 7 Part Story
Valeria Zecchini By wowimcool97 Updated Feb 08, 2011

Selene Roberts is a vampire. Mithchel Dean is human. Selene hates her life. Mitchel thinks his is boring. What will happen? What threats is the entire vampire community going to be exposed to?
(ON HOLD UNTIL I WRIT THE 20th CHAPTER TO MY OTHER STORY)

oceantoodeep oceantoodeep Feb 18, 2011
I like it! i like the way you describe the surroundings and what the character's think about. please write more!!
oceantoodeep oceantoodeep Feb 18, 2011
it's really good, leaving me curious about what would happen next. but, i suggest you make longer paragraphs. cutting it into small ones kinda kill the tension before it's starts blooming. please keep writing :)
tianajade tianajade Feb 06, 2011
Good beginning! Definitely leaves the reader wanting to turn to the next page! (:
wowimcool97 wowimcool97 Feb 04, 2011
 @Frozen2011 thank you so much you made my day!! ( technically night) :)
wowimcool97 wowimcool97 Feb 04, 2011
 @Frozen2011 thank you so much you made my day!! ( technically night) :)
SamIAm21 SamIAm21 Feb 01, 2011
OMFG!! THis is insane!! Your descriptions as a vampire are amazing and my mouth dropped when they said someone was watching!! :D