The Final Song

The Final Song

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Jadelinn By JadedRein Completed

Jeffery Paston is a man ruled by obsession; once he finds himself infatuated with something he will use any twisted method possible to fulfill his desires. There is no such thing as going ‘too far’ for a desperate man.

- - Jul 26, 2014
It is twisted.. but amazingly written.. There was a moment I thought      
                              I actually understood what he thought.. 
                              great job :)
xKiraAdamsx xKiraAdamsx Sep 30, 2013
This is sick and disturbing--Yet very well written. I almost feel guilty for liking your writing. But as a writer---it's something I can appreciate.
Molierecanada Molierecanada Aug 24, 2013
awww!!!  forgive me but this a most awful story...not worthy of a good author... but I suppose it had to be told
Grace_toft Grace_toft Mar 21, 2013
Is the 6pages the story or will there be more? :) by the way the story is amazing!
13BrownEyedGirl13 13BrownEyedGirl13 Feb 03, 2013
Whoa....that was creepy...but we'll written.. You got really into character and it made me feel like it was actually happening.
musicluvr musicluvr Jan 23, 2013
@musicluvr ha sorry taught me to not trust old guys that look remotely crazy ha