This tale is about two best friends escape, their misadvetures, and perhaps even a romance or two along the way.
its appreciated. Ive never felt like a very good writer.
I love yours too.
@ZoeeLynn lol I know how you feel. Me being Irish, a lot of people don't always understand what I'm saying. Even being from outside of the town where I go to school can make my friends ask me what I just said! LOL Love your work!
Ahh. Yehh, like, I know a lot of people dont.
But my friends and I have always talked like that.
We tend to use words that most people don't.
I think that your story has an interesting beginning and I like how you ended the chapter with her saying about her mother and father. It makes me want to read on and I think that it gives the chapter a finality but its also like an invitation. I know that sounds totally weird but its what I think!