War of the Seasons, book one: The Human

War of the Seasons, book one: The Human

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Janine Spendlove By JanineSpendlove Completed

“Are you alright?" The corner of Eirnin’s mouth quirked up with a hint of a smile, probably remembering her reaction when he’d asked her that a moment ago. 

Story smiled sheepishly back up at him. "I'm fine. I think I just stepped on a rock and cut my foot. If I ever find out who took my shoes, I'll kill them." 	

He lowered himself to one knee and bent over to pick up her injured foot. "I'd be willing to bet it was one of the fey. They're very territorial by nature and often take things that are left lying—” 

His voice cut off abruptly, and he stiffened before jerking to his feet and backing away from her as if she had a contagious disease. He stopped only when his back hit a tree. Eirnin of the Eáchan clan’s silver eyes—now with hints of bright yellow to them—widened in astonishment, and he stared, transfixed, at the red blood dripping from her foot.  	"What are you?"

GloriaMagege GloriaMagege Aug 24, 2015
I realize this is a memory, but I think there should have been an indication, like using italics or past tense, or a break. it was confusing to follow because I was pretty sure her dad isn't with them here
abby_rachel abby_rachel Jun 23, 2015
That's a great rule to live by. I always hit my head on stuff.
bails100 bails100 Mar 06, 2015
OK, I've not read any further but if this turns out to be a dream sequence or one where she has amazing adventures and no time he's passed then I'll bang my head in that virtual cave wall! so far so good though. ;)
inkovercookies inkovercookies Jan 18, 2015
I'm so happy I found this story.  Easy to follow yet brightly written.  It was like reading an episode of a new favorite TV show.
Dragons-Are-Real Dragons-Are-Real Nov 26, 2014
I love your descriptions :D it's pretty amazing. I can picture all of that
mrs_spock mrs_spock Nov 05, 2014
Read this on my old account. Loved it. Now I'm rereading it.