Out of this World

Out of this World

1.2K Reads 26 Votes 15 Part Story
Jonathan By deathbyink Completed

Brian finds an alien life form that moves in with him.  Guess what will happen or just read.

Rindeshu Rindeshu Mar 29, 2011
This is just my opinion but: The actions happen too fast. You're not describing it enough. Add more details. Just my opinion/suggestion.
- - Mar 15, 2011
Wow. Very interesting. I like how you described every detail and I like it also because it's different from usual stories. It's unique. Keep up the great work!
Wotchy Wotchy Feb 23, 2011
Hey :) This is really cool. My book 'An Alien Love' is like this. I hope u update more :)