Brian finds an alien life form that moves in with him. Guess what will happen or just read.
This is just my opinion but: The actions happen too fast. You're not describing it enough. Add more details. Just my opinion/suggestion.
Wow. Very interesting. I like how you described every detail and I like it also because it's different from usual stories. It's unique. Keep up the great work!
Hey :) This is really cool. My book 'An Alien Love' is like this. I hope u update more :)