alone, forever......possibly

alone, forever......possibly

4.1K Reads 78 Votes 14 Part Story
iluvdance117 By iluvdance117 Updated Mar 31, 2011

It's war time. Deven has been captured by two cousins, Ryan and Logan,for politcal reasons. She's locked up and unaware of the outside world, thinking that all her loved ones are dead and wanting to die as well. However, her family is alive, barely getting by without her. They don't know where she has gone but they know she's alive and she didn't leave by choice. Can Deven get out of her prison and rturn to mental normality? Or will she and her family suffer in grief....forever,possibly.
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Jemn1611 Jemn1611 Mar 14, 2011
I really liker how you have started this off. it has little detail yet makes you wonder what has happened i think this is a great way of starting things off :) it really draws people in and they want to read more. great introduction i'll be sure to read more soon :) Voted 
Katty4DaDrama Katty4DaDrama Feb 21, 2011
Read by Lexi Breanna Boyd ur friend x] I love you Amanda.(: 
iluvdance117 iluvdance117 Feb 01, 2011
@hillvolleygirl haha i did its gr8 :)
                              @twin-nikki lolz thx!
                              
                              plse fan nd vote!! :)
Noemi_88 Noemi_88 Feb 01, 2011
sounds like a good story. Let's go and read the next chapter!!! :)
NocheNegra NocheNegra Feb 01, 2011
Actually I love the title, it's intriguing and rlly catches my attention!
hillvolleygirl hillvolleygirl Jan 30, 2011
Keep writing! This is awesome!
                              
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