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He Changed my Fate They Changed my Life

He Changed my Fate They Changed my Life

7.3K Reads 185 Votes 10 Part Story
:) nup By storyworld Updated Aug 22, 2011

Eva, a girl who's an undercover star with a mask on. All her life did she not realize her one and only love was her best friend, Anthony. But by the time she realizes, it was already too late. Anthony's girlfriend discovers Eva's liking towards Anthony threatens Eva to stay away from Anthony or else she'll spill the truth about Eva as a star. Will Eva save her courier and be with Anthony? Or will she have to give up on one in order to get the other?

Seyaii Seyaii Jul 10, 2011
Good job!!
                              It's a very unique idea, and is very well written.
                              Good job!
IHaveADream IHaveADream Jul 10, 2011
Wow, I would start screaming my head off if creepy men in suits started to surround me. Great work.
Eclipse119 Eclipse119 Jul 10, 2011
Hey, this is a really great start! I'll be back to read more:) *voted*
Kahlia Kahlia Jul 10, 2011
@storyworld sure!
                              and while you're there, her stories are also amazing :) xx
storyworld storyworld Jul 10, 2011
@Kahlia Don't worry I'm not offended. Thanks for the comment! Can you give me the link to the person???
VenessaJinson VenessaJinson Jul 09, 2011
I thought you switiched from past to present a couple times. It's not a big deal, but you should try to stick with just one. All in all it was a pretty good story!! Great job!! :) Voted!!