The War I Fight

The War I Fight

15 Part Story 4.6K Reads 127 Votes
Emily Charlotte Cooledge By EmilyCharlotteCooledge Updated Nov 16, 2013

Two men join the army, they know the risks, they know they could die but they still join never the less, to protect their country. When their plane is shot down over Afghanistan, their company gets split up, each solider gets seperated but the last ones left on the plane are the two soliders, the two best friends, Jack and Daniel. After jumping out of the plane with the parachute they land on Afghanistan soil but when Daniel wakes up, Jack is missing. This is the story of the bestfriend who refuses to abandon his friend as he's declared MIA, ignoring the warnings of others Daniel goes on the search for his best friend, regardless of the consequences. As Daniel struggles to find his friend he discovers secrets that he wished he never knew, now the burdan of the world is on him and with his friends life in jepordy, time is running out.
    
    
    [ON HOLD - Sorry.]

rwindson rwindson Jul 17, 2013 07:54AM
Alright! I like how vivid and gritty the friend's death was, though the narrative for others contained too many commas and paragraphs! Many good sentences make a good story :)
                                    
                                    Liked it :)
SiBiggs SiBiggs May 08, 2012 07:17AM
OK well good luck, plenty of jobs to choose from, and everyone plays their part its a big team.
@SiBiggs Hi, thanks, yeah I want to join up but I'm not sure what jobs I want to do yet, I was thinking bout being an AT or do something as close to the front line as possible.
SiBiggs SiBiggs May 07, 2012 05:06PM
Well done, very good stuff considering you are still considering joining up.
@MoshiMoshiAishteru Haha I'll try not to, it depends what job I choose. Don't worry they'll be plenty of books from me to read :)
@MoshiMoshiAishteru yeah, as soon as I'm old enough I'm going so I thought I might as well write down my ideas so if I get killed then they're out there forever for people to read.