The Fallen and Forgotten

The Fallen and Forgotten

9 Part Story 1.1K Reads 59 Votes
Finley By finley777 Updated Jan 28, 2012

Aldines a small town no one thought any good would come from.  They were wrong though.  When their world is condemned to darkness and needs the help it most desires will the three fallen children rise to the calling or desert their ways and let greed over take them with the power it has to offer.

SpacerX SpacerX Mar 24, 2012 05:58PM
Wow I love the plot and your writing is very interesting. I laughed at some parts and it just drew me in! Very nice!
Its good! Maybe grammar here and there but no ones perfect! :D
KilgharrahFire KilgharrahFire Jan 28, 2012 12:43AM
i like it, it's funny and wel written XD i will read more later on
qwerty20010 qwerty20010 Jan 25, 2012 01:31PM
im sorry but this dosnt captivate me, it might not be for all readers sorry!
                              it did to start with but i lost intersest...
BeAfraidOfDark BeAfraidOfDark Jan 23, 2012 09:07PM
this a really well written chapter and i really liked it. it flows well and catches the reader straight away, nice!