Beautiful misery

Beautiful misery

6.7K Reads 112 Votes 15 Part Story
RaphaeleCline By RaphaeleCline Updated Feb 05, 2012

~You have to suffer to be happy~

Maya is a 16 year old girl who is constantly abused by her dad. She has to find a way out but is scared of where she might end up. Little does she know that one punch too many will get the police involved and may just save her from her alcoholic father. But will this take away her misery?

ajgrocks55105866 ajgrocks55105866 Jun 12, 2014
It was amazing I like that you didn't just go she died and you kinda edged into it to make it more interesting
MeganBrown70 MeganBrown70 Jul 07, 2011
i love this start so far, i love the way you write :)
                              its a very interesting start
                              greart job :)
                              voted
                              fanned
                              added to library 
                              :)
justashleigh justashleigh Apr 04, 2011
oh wow! this was simply amazing. i'm almost crying right now :'( it's like a 9 year old's nightmare coming to life through your words. when i have the time, i will go on to read the other parts (: <3
RaphaeleCline RaphaeleCline Mar 04, 2011
haha i dont quite know yet, i`ve been pretty busy lately but I promise i‘ll start working on it soon ;)
Joon_Nathea Joon_Nathea Mar 04, 2011
When's the next part comming out???????
                              I so cannot wait for it^^
PolkaDot41 PolkaDot41 Mar 03, 2011
Oh my. That was absolutely tearful! :'( Keep writing I gotta read that happypily ever after hopefully