The Black Carnival

The Black Carnival

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GUMBiiE By GUMBiiE Updated Dec 02, 2011

The Black Carnival is coming to town
Lock up your kids regardless the frown
The ringleader searches, looking for prey
Will you be next, to play his game?

TheSinningFangirl TheSinningFangirl Sep 11, 2014
This was great! I'm thinking of making an evil carnival thing as well! I made one a year or two ago but my writing wasn't really good then, I'm hoping to do better.
                                      That was very good and creepy!
swagmasta83 swagmasta83 Sep 06, 2013
have you watch the movie dark carnival its about these friends set there haunted carnival and it looks so real but its not but when they closed it down the carnival comes to life and starts killing the workers.
Embeexo Embeexo Feb 07, 2013
Dammit I read it at night :| ... great start btw, it really drew me in :D
ali220198 ali220198 Aug 25, 2012
OMG!!!this is an amzing horror story!!! you're seriosly takented!! how the hell did you come up with this?!
blue_eyed_freak blue_eyed_freak Aug 18, 2012
Really good. Creepy, scary, downright gruesome, but good :) I have a question, though - when did that dude sew that guy's eyes and mouth shut? Was it in the dark, when they were still coming out, or something?
Drusella77 Drusella77 Jun 29, 2012
Okay, note to self: NEVER GOING TO A CARNIVAL AGAIN! haha just kidding! But very well written and classically creepy!!! :)