The Black Carnival

The Black Carnival

15 Part Story 100K Reads 1.4K Votes
GUMBiiE By GUMBiiE Updated Dec 02, 2011

The Black Carnival is coming to town
    Lock up your kids regardless the frown
    The ringleader searches, looking for prey
    Will you be next, to play his game?

Pjbunny Pjbunny Sep 11, 2014 02:01AM
This was great! I'm thinking of making an evil carnival thing as well! I made one a year or two ago but my writing wasn't really good then, I'm hoping to do better.
                                            That was very good and creepy!
swagmasta83 swagmasta83 Sep 06, 2013 12:58PM
have you watch the movie dark carnival its about these friends set there haunted carnival and it looks so real but its not but when they closed it down the carnival comes to life and starts killing the workers.
Embeexo Embeexo Feb 07, 2013 10:51AM
Dammit I read it at night :| ... great start btw, it really drew me in :D
ali220198 ali220198 Aug 25, 2012 12:21PM
OMG!!!this is an amzing horror story!!! you're seriosly takented!! how the hell did you come up with this?!
Really good. Creepy, scary, downright gruesome, but good :) I have a question, though - when did that dude sew that guy's eyes and mouth shut? Was it in the dark, when they were still coming out, or something?
Drusella77 Drusella77 Jun 29, 2012 08:17PM
Okay, note to self: NEVER GOING TO A CARNIVAL AGAIN! haha just kidding! But very well written and classically creepy!!! :)