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I Wished It Had Been Me

I Wished It Had Been Me

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Darian:D By OneOfTheMusicFreaxx Updated Jan 18, 2011

Jaylee is moving in with her dad for the summer. Leaving behind Ohio and heading to sunny California. She'll live in a two bedroom apartment with her father who she hasn't seen in almost two years. She soon realizes that this summer might be the hardest one shes had to get through. She meets Cade, who happens to work and live in the same apartment she will be staying in. He immediately lets Jaylee know that there is no chance for them, not that she seems to have a problem with that. Though, keeping out of his way proves difficult in the passing days and she eventually cant ignore him...... especially since he has a job helping her dad move around and redecorate his apartment. This summer just got a little more heated up.

WhatIfNot WhatIfNot Jan 24, 2011
It sounds good so far, but I don't think it takes 30 hours to fly non-stop from Ohio to California. Otherwise, great  job :) 
lovebree lovebree Jan 22, 2011
                              This is really good so far!
                              I like sneeze-lady...shes funny:P
                              Looking forward to more!