Chained (ON HOLD)

Chained (ON HOLD)

27 Part Story 4.9M Reads 70.9K Votes
Ariana Godoy By cold_lady19 Updated Dec 20, 2014

Never look into his eyes.
Never let him touch you.
Never speak to him.

He will consume your soul.
He will extinguish your dreams.
He will turn you into nothing. 

Do not let him get to you.
Do not trust him.
Do not fall for his words and false promises. 

He is a master of lying and King of persuasion. 

Who is he? Read and find out.

LissyPop LissyPop Jun 12, 2016 01:04PM
Wow! Your writing is very sensual and gorgeous! Wonderful imagery as well! Great job! :)
kbook13 kbook13 Aug 01, 2016 06:54PM
Hi! 
                              This chapter is just amazing! 
                              The way you describe him is soo deep and intense. I can't wait to read the second chapter. Well... that's what i'm doing now.
I read the summary at the beginning and I have to say that "he" is probs a dementor
You should win the B.A.E award (Best author Ever) *Don't take it too seeiously, readers, I don't think ot even exists xD
BartholaryXXX BartholaryXXX Jun 30, 2015 05:02AM
I don't like Isis... She reminds me of ISIS with their religious behavior... You shouldn't watch their videos before having an exam... I failed that exam thanks to ISIS
I've been a fan of your works for a long time, thank you for your hard work. I will patiently wait for your next update. Good luck.