Chained (ON HOLD)

Chained (ON HOLD)

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Ariana Godoy By cold_lady19 Updated Dec 20, 2014

Never look into his eyes.
Never let him touch you.
Never speak to him.

He will consume your soul.
He will extinguish your dreams.
He will turn you into nothing. 

Do not let him get to you.
Do not trust him.
Do not fall for his words and false promises. 

He is a master of lying and King of persuasion. 

Who is he? Read and find out.

LissyPop LissyPop Jun 12
Wow! Your writing is very sensual and gorgeous! Wonderful imagery as well! Great job! :)
kbook13 kbook13 Aug 01
Hi! 
                              This chapter is just amazing! 
                              The way you describe him is soo deep and intense. I can't wait to read the second chapter. Well... that's what i'm doing now.
Penguin_505 Penguin_505 Sep 06
Keep them the most present in your mind I think this sounds better then "keeping them..." 😊
Penguin_505 Penguin_505 Sep 06
I think cruelty or evil nature sounds better here, and so far I am really intrigued.
PhoenixBenzedrine PhoenixBenzedrine Oct 12, 2015
I read the summary at the beginning and I have to say that "he" is probs a dementor
XodoesitmatterXo XodoesitmatterXo Aug 23, 2015
You should win the B.A.E award (Best author Ever) *Don't take it too seeiously, readers, I don't think ot even exists xD