Abused,Harry Potter

Abused,Harry Potter

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iluv1dandfood By iluv1dandfood Updated Apr 04, 2015

Charlotte Lilly Black is the unknown daughter of  the mass murderer Sirius Black.
Charlotte doesn't know who her father or mother are and lives with her abusive adoptive father,Mark.
Dumbledore saves her,but does not know he has and brings her to hogwarts but what happens when Sirius Black is on the lose?
And will she have to go back to Mark?

    This made me laugh so hard - it's exactly what snape would say in that situation
    And not trying to be critical but she is backly lying in a pool of her own blood
    I might've been able to read this, if not got all the grammar issues
    I am not trying to be rude but the grammar and spelling are incorrect
    Why doesn't she run away while he's gone? You also need to put spaces in between your periods and commas, and capitalize your I(s)
    BTW, when comment, forgive english, I am Russia
                                  
                                  
                                  
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