The sister gets the Alpha (On Hold)

The sister gets the Alpha (On Hold)

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Callie By Callie_11 Updated Sep 27, 2014

Callie is the youngest of two beautiful sisters. Her family are changelings, they have the ability to shift into leopards however Callie can not, she's human.  Born without the gene to shift she considers herself as the ugly duckling. Her sisters are both thin blonde and beautiful where as Callie wasn't. She had brown curly hair with a tint of gold, hazel brown eyes and a curvy figure. 

But The Italian Leopard Alpha of the Deep Breeze pack found her beautiful.

I get hooked to this book everytine I read this part of the book.  6th time reading it and I just want to say YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITING.
_andaconda_ _andaconda_ Jan 26
The funny thing is most girls would kill to have curves like hers
poetic- poetic- Jan 25, 2015
COMMAS AND YEARS ARE SUPPOSED TO BE REPRESENTED IN NUMBERS. AHHHH! The no-comma thing is bugging the crap out of me. I REALLY hope that the authors grammar with commas will be awesome in the next few chapters. I simply can't read if there are grammar errors. I'm such a Grammar Nazi asśhole. ._.
thecloudsaremovin thecloudsaremovin Jan 18, 2015
If your talking about members of the cat family, wouldn't you call it a pride?
BrittanyAlana0000 BrittanyAlana0000 Apr 20, 2014
I think its a great idea but you referred it as "packs".Cats in large numbers are called prides.
jeci1918 jeci1918 Apr 06, 2014
Just a little editing tip, "packs" of large cats are actually called prides (: just thought I'd let you know! Love the story so far (: