Totally Cliche but Different

Totally Cliche but Different

308 Reads 8 Votes 4 Part Story
Chiz By angel2 Updated Feb 26, 2011

Cindy Thomas lives a totally cliche life in California going to school in Landon Homes High School, but everything seems to change as soon as she meets her soon to be soul mate or her worst nightmare, Jay Kaylin. He tells her that she's actually a princess of a whole new planet named Aquatania and they are supposed to be the rulers since the king and queen died of an evil force. Though Cindy who is real name is Cecelia doesn't trust Jay and think he's crazy she doesn't really know what to beleive in her cliche life anymore. Will Cindy trust Jay and herself to rule a whole new kingdom she's never been to or doubt everything Jay has told her and move on with her cliche life? Found out on a very cliche and very different kind of story: Totally Cliche but Different!

Silver-Lining Silver-Lining Jan 28, 2011
This sounds like it could be a pretty cool sory, just a couple of point, in the last paragraph you call Jay a goddess, I asume it's just a mistake xp apart from that it's a goos prologue/chapter one :) 
RNMurray RNMurray Jan 26, 2011
It's not really much i won't read lol. I'm loving the dialogue you do a good job of  pulling the reader into the story
xWinglessx xWinglessx Jan 17, 2011
lol i love it. And i agree your character Jay is a hottie :)
                              Ooo so this is based on a true story :D