The Sinister Teacher Likes Me

The Sinister Teacher Likes Me

7.8K Reads 143 Votes 6 Part Story
Radhikaaaaaa By AddictedToVamps Updated Mar 28, 2011

Naomi Wright's life changes from the day she steps into school after her Christmas break.
She thinks of herself as being plain, dull and boring.
But after an interesting news arises in her school, her life takes a change for the worst. 
And this plain, dull and boring girl is in fact an amusing, hot and fascinating child towards a certain someone.
For any other girl, to look hot in this special someone's eyes would have been a dream come true, but for Naomi, its pure hell.
Her life becomes unbearable, everyone begins to turn against her and no one believes her. 
All because of one guy...

(the story has been edited, so it should be a lot better!) please read and comment, it honestly pushes me to write. Thank you.)

PyroResistance PyroResistance Apr 07, 2011
Sounds great so far! Minor grammar errors but flowing nicely and I really like your writing style (: 
                              
                              Can't wait for more; voted! 
trishthewriter trishthewriter Mar 06, 2011
I like the hook you used. I'm a great fan of starting a story with a quote that makes people wonder what's about to happen. For that, you've got my vote. 
Crisann1976 Crisann1976 Feb 15, 2011
I like the cover & the first chap :) I'm looking forward to what happens.. 'cause I love a good teacher/ student story!
tianajade tianajade Feb 13, 2011
A good beginning (: Most of your writing flows nicely. It's an interesting and different story line, which is good! It definitely has potential. Only a few grammar errors here and there. A good job, and keep writing!
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