A short story about a man running for his life.
thats pretty cool. I love it! specially the description of his emotions and surroundings :) :P
Wow, very suspenseful and scary. Really liked it. The same thing happens to me as far as something in my head that wont leave me alone. I feel so much better after I am able to sit and write it down.
oh my god.... i read this cuz i was bored and it was.... ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!! This is.... god i don't even know, i'm speechless! i'm only 13, and i love writing!! I hope one day I can be as good as you.... thanks for doing what you do! It means a lot to people, myself included!
Amazing descriptions. Could see and feel the whole thing in my imagination.
@zombie45 Good luck on catching up! I was gone just for last night and I'm swamped!
I think the ending of this gets much more notice than the beginning and middle put together! hehe. Oh well, I'm not a short story writer so what would I know. XD
Glad you liked it.
@viva_la_vidaxxx Thanks Viva! I really appreciate the support.
I look forward to talking to you again tomorrow. Nite!