Aiden smith is Silas's mate plain and simple Silas avoided coming in contact with Aiden till... His heat starts also Silas has a pregnant girlfriend will Aiden accept Silas as his mate or will he turn his back on him.
Silas you shoulda have made it clear to your girlfriend about the two of you same with Aiden.....it's going to confuse you later on
LIKEY IT SO FAR.
DO NOT LIKE THE REJECTION ONES.
WHERE THE WOLF MATE TAKES ADVANTAGE OF THEIR MATE.
I'm confused, so are humans suppose to know about mates before they have one?
I don't know if Silas an prick or just a dumb jerkface. Slry, it's confusing me a little, but whatevs. Its first chapter, first chapters alwasy confuse me. Sometimes.
This isn't bad. It has a lot of potential but it needs a bit of work. For example, you have a few grammatical and punctuation errors that need to be fixed. You also might want to work on your verb tenses. Other than that, it's not that bad. Good job.
Sooo it seems to be a rough boy v. soft boy boyxboy story. It is good! It is a definite turn on when it comes to storygasms...lol >.< I know... im sorry for saying that but still, its true. Keep up the good work.