In The Arms of The Better Lover, The Better Brother

In The Arms of The Better Lover, The Better Brother

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Berry Hall By berryhall Updated Mar 24, 2011

If you were to save a princess and her father were to promise to you either her hand or your honour as his dearest and closest advisor, which would you choose? If your brother wanted the princess, would you want her too? If it stood as her decision alone, would you fight for her, or do your best to put her off to you? When she ended up the arms of the better lover, would they be yours or your brothers?

Naarah Naarah Feb 12, 2011
I'm loving it so far!  I like the take on it (from the night's POV).  I like who you've painted him out to be.  I look forward to reading more... here I go... :D
berryhall berryhall Feb 05, 2011
@axie2120 well benigno I found online at behindthename.com and aunnabelleiiyna is the product of an over active imagination. :P u put together every syllable combo u can think of . And thank you :) glad u like them 
axie2120 axie2120 Feb 05, 2011
I like Benigno!I mean such an unusual name...and Aunnabelleiiyna...how did you come up with that? It's soo good!
axie2120 axie2120 Feb 05, 2011
I went 'awww' after this!...thank you...this story is really great! I think you should go for watty awards with this...you might just win! =)
berryhall berryhall Jan 22, 2011
@1life1love Yay! I love her name too! Haha. It's a very key fight in the plot line. Their later interactions revolve around it a lot. :P Thank you a ton!
1life1love 1life1love Jan 22, 2011
yes! i love her name :) and their fight was intense, lol. and very amusing.
                              great chapitre :D