The Final Days

The Final Days

727 Reads 34 Votes 16 Part Story
Nicolas Martinez By WildChildWild Completed

Its the end of the world, and Me Nicolas, I'm  the only person that can stop it, I can see the future make portals to go to places, and I can stop time and go back in time, but I can't do it alone, I have my friends with me to help, Mattie she can control wind, water, fire, air, and with her element powers she can somehow heal. I know it sounds like a lot of powers but its true, Breanna, she is superfast and is really smart, and has the power to make anything do as she wants it to do, now we are going to stop the end the world BYE!

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ashleerae2 ashleerae2 Dec 12, 2016
Really good but a little hard to follow. You should start a new paragraph when someone else is talking :)
eddielovesgaga eddielovesgaga Dec 29, 2016
Loved this story! Please be sure to check out my new story "The Camp Meadow Slasher!" Be sure to vote and comment! Thanks!❤
iBwittney iBwittney Dec 03, 2016
How were Brianna and Mattie able to hot wire a car and pack all the stuff if time was frozen?
cottoncandydun cottoncandydun Nov 25, 2016
Aurther hand meme!I'm sorry I'll go now.*Leaves door open after exiting*
reminarad reminarad Nov 30, 2016
He's a badass. I love how he slays the bad guys. 
                              
                              I advise you write in multiple paragraphs, not just one.