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Bittersweet Reality

Bittersweet Reality

30K Reads 847 Votes 8 Part Story
Jaimi By Silent_Innocence Updated Mar 13, 2014

"Hearing Benjamin groan quietly under his breath, I smiled my lips still pressed to his, and lost my hands in his hair as I pulled him closer to myself. Sliding a single hand down his chest, I smiled as Benjamin took a sharp breath as my hand landed over his jeans in the perfect position. "
When Willow Chancler found herself submerged in a self induced depression, a depression that the whole world as oblivious to, she never imagined that she would meet someone just like her, if not worse off. When Benjamin Amsden comes crashing into Willow's life through what they both thought would be a one night stand, Willow discovers how important the strength of another can be. Struggling to pull Benjamin away from the brink of suicide, Willow subconsciously realizes her reasons for depression are pathetic compared to Benjamin's, and while she manages to save herself, will she be quick enough to save Benjamin?

CatRyer CatRyer Mar 30, 2013
Keep writing!  I'm curious to learn more about the baggage they are both trying not to bring to the relationship that they are "trying not to have" LOL
itsneha_ itsneha_ Mar 07, 2013
The cover is so cute! Like hes all muscle and shes all girly fat but they both flex!
lilly-rain lilly-rain Jul 14, 2012
A good start, you seemed to portray her emotions well enough and it flowed smoothly. A few little errors, but they are easy fixed. Great job.
Larenf Larenf Jul 02, 2012
Good job.  This seems like a really great start but I suggest you do some editing.  There are a lot of run-on sentences and spelling errors so fix those and the story will be so much better!  Keep working at it :)
GrawrImmaEatYuu GrawrImmaEatYuu Mar 24, 2012
CONTINUE! oh and did they use a condom... i know odd question but it could be important later....
Izabel12 Izabel12 Jan 19, 2012
From what I read so far, I liked it. I would love to see what will happen next and how things being to unravel. So please keep up your great writong and update real soon!!!! (: