never ending love (bella and edward story)

never ending love (bella and edward story)

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tasha By dollface_twi-mom03 Updated Mar 02, 2012

true love wins all....when Bella Swan moves to be closer to her dad will she love it or hate it in forks?
 also when one door opens another door closes in here life. she meets amazing friends that help her through her new time of being a new student in a new school and falling  in love.... remember love in a feeling when you meet your soul mate it doesn't matter how long you know that person.....
aslo the story jumps years at a point inthe story but you'll know when.

dollface_twi-mom03 dollface_twi-mom03 Feb 23, 2013
@vulturemonem thanks for the comment I am pulling this story and fixing errors with in the next week nut again thanks for reading my storys
vulturemonem vulturemonem Feb 23, 2013
It was good, but work on the speech marks. Use a new line for each new speaker, I skip two for a new speaker  and for a new paragraph, it makes it easier to handle. Practise and it will come! 
                              
                              Lucy xX