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Eden Fortae By EdenFortae Completed

What do you do when you find yourself in the hands of the very creatures you've molded your life around hunting? When her entire team is wiped out during a mission, Lonie is captured and forced to stand on the very stage that many humans before her stood to be auctioned off as food sources and pets for vampires. A hefty price is set for the deadly beauty and raised by those anxious to see her meet the same fate as all who have died at her hands. The highest bidder; a vampire with exceptionally dark features and eyes has other plans however. Instead of torturing her to death painfully slow, he plans to break her in his own way each day at nightfall by make her his slave in not just blood but body.

Phoenix12467 Phoenix12467 Oct 26, 2013
I think this amazing and i want to read the whole thing right now but I'm so tired I have to wait till later. I also wanted to say that I spotted a typo in the fist chapter but other than that I love the way you write and I wish I was as good as you. :)
CharlieJuliet CharlieJuliet Oct 24, 2013
I know I said I don't read vampire stories, but I think I'll give this a shot. It's comforting to know that we wouldn't be getting sissy vampires and the female character seems kick-ass, being a hunter and all.
Tmk906 Tmk906 Oct 21, 2013
I'm liking the first chapter! Great work! Looking to see how this all plays out, something tells me I'm going to like the non-soul mates thing. There are too many of those so its a nice change. Not that its bad but overly used. :P 
                              Keep up the good work!
hellsstach3 hellsstach3 Oct 20, 2013
I can't wait... That part where you says they aren't pretty under the sun made me laugh... Waiting anxiously! ^_^
sakshimehta97 sakshimehta97 Oct 18, 2013
The summary is very interesting! ;) Is this going to be a short story? Just curious.
DoTheseMatter DoTheseMatter Oct 18, 2013
love the summary! caught my attention right away and made me want more, wish you the best of luck in the contest :)