The Dark Shade's Letter

The Dark Shade's Letter

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PennyPP By PennyPP Updated Jun 07, 2010

A writer finds good fortune smiling on her when the book she writes becomes a bestseller...first come the morning talk shows,  then a lucrative contract for a series of books to follow her bestseller... among all these wonderful things comes the offer to join an exclusive secret society...The Secret Society of the Helping Hand...but is it really just people in the shadowy world of Spies, Assassins and others, simply wanting to raise money to help people, and places, like earthquake victims in Haiti? As a writer it seems like the opportunity of a lifetime, the material to be gleaned from such a company of interesting people seems to good to be  true, is it? Is it just a way do charity like the fund raising events put on by other secret societies (the masons for example) or is there more to it then that... But everything has a price in life what will be this ones price and will it be worth the cost..

PennyPP PennyPP Mar 12, 2011
@iHeartCoke Thank you I have been unable to write for some time so completing the story has been near to impossible I had hopes that my protege would help... Thank u I didnt think anyone was still reading this.
PennyPP PennyPP Jun 09, 2010
@OhMyFatalFatima well I learned a lot from my protege she has a wicked sense of humor...
PennyPP PennyPP Mar 31, 2010
yes and worse yet my editor is on a two week break and that means that I either wait till she gets back before posting my next novella in the series (short novel that in this case could stand alone or be a part of the previous work) or just post it as is...
alicev alicev Mar 27, 2010
Nice story! I wonder what this secret society is really about....hmmm... 
                              
                              The only thing I really see wrong with your writing is the run-on sentences but then again, you already explained that you do that sometimes and that this story wasn't professionally edited.
PennyPP PennyPP Mar 21, 2010
Thanks yes I do have a bit of a problem that way... sorry usually I have a professional editor fix it before I let people read but was afraid it would get up in time for the Helping Hand contest...
flowerchild19 flowerchild19 Mar 21, 2010
I've only gotten down to chapter 2 so far and I think the story is very interesting.  However, you could use more puctuation. Some of your sentences run together... I really do love the overall story so far though.