The Empty Place

The Empty Place

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Chloeeee943 By Chloeeee943 Updated Oct 15, 2013

There were seven of us that found the aliens. We discovered that the aliens were desperate and dying. They wanted us to help. They promised us powers and strength. We said yes. Now, as we rise and grow, they are changing us. We no longer know reality from a lie. We are more powerful than all other humans on Earth. Yet that is what's threatening to destroy us. ***Just a few notes, this story is science fiction as well as teen fiction. I am not finished yet, but will be publishing more soon! Also, please comment! I'm not really sure about how this story is coming together, so it would be super helpful if I could get some opinions and suggestions for how to improve my writing. Thank you! ***Copyright: All rights reserved.

  • adventure
  • aliens
  • bravery
  • communication
  • death
  • distopía
  • exploration
  • fantasy
  • friendship
  • future
  • hate
  • hope
  • lena
  • love
  • planets
  • science-fiction
  • strengh

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