Carter and Sophie have been bestfriends since they were 5. Somthing happens between them in middle school,and their relationship falls apart. Its a new school year, what will happen? Can one of them fix it?
Ohh I like this :) I'm guessing the HE is Carter?
And since you asked for constructive criticism, I'll give you this one ;) You might want to keep in mind that I is written with a capital letter :P
But I really really like this story :) On to the next chapter!