Pretty Kids with Problems

Pretty Kids with Problems

963 Reads 31 Votes 2 Part Story
Joelle By Junerush Updated Mar 27, 2011

Maggie has problems. Always has. Always will. After her protective brother Drew gets into a brawl with the reason behind Maggie's cutting, her parents both agree that they should leave their average, quiet neighborhood and move to the hustle and bustle town, Toronto. The lives of four wealthy, teenage rebels are seen through the eyes of Maggie who herself gets involved in their heartaches and battles with sex, alcohol, and drugs, all leading to someone's demise. They all are indeed, pretty kids with problems.

Cloverism Cloverism Jul 23, 2011
Torontoooo. ;) Home town babyy! xD
                              :D Great job on the writing, I like it really much! 
EmyPapasideris EmyPapasideris Jun 22, 2011
You've got good structure and grammar. One I would suggest is to forego some of the exclamations marks when the principal is talking, but other than that nice work : )
EzraWinn EzraWinn Jun 22, 2011
this is really interesting it's well written it's a really good read
myemergencyexit myemergencyexit Jun 22, 2011
Oh wow that was unexpected. Intrigued to find out why she dyed her hair and what else she's hiding (: Great writing!
colesandra20 colesandra20 Jun 22, 2011
Now I want someone like Drew as a brother :D (you know, protective, fun, flirty)
                              
                              and it did hook from the start :)
                              keep it up! :D
- - Mar 04, 2011
Good job. Interesting idea. But edit it because you had some mistakes. Other than that I really enjoyed it. Hope you do well in the Watty Awards, best of luck!