Twin girls decide to play a prank on their new school, but what happens when they get more then what they have bargained for when one meets bad boy Sasori? And the other twin meets his cousin, Gaara? GaaraxOC, SasorixOC RxR PLEASE!
K so i didn't even realize this was a fan fic.... Anyways this is really good! Weird, but good! It's a little hard to follow, but it's interesting.
Your style of writing is a bit shaky. But with more writing, you should get the hang of it. Your story line is awesome, there's a lot to do with it :)
I hate the ending >.< Why does she have to get hurt like that?! At the same time, I love the ending because now that she's safe [although, she's in a lot of pain] and is with Sasori :'>