Dangerous Insecurities

Dangerous Insecurities

5.6K Reads 159 Votes 8 Part Story
Shay-lee By LaLaLa95 Updated Mar 16, 2011

Holley Swan is ony 15 years old, but already she has faced some of the roughest roads possible. Her father left when she was only 9 years old and her mother has since become a drug and sex addict. Holley is considered an ugly freak at school and an unwanted child at home. She doesnt know what to do with her life. Should she walk out like her Father did six years ago, or should she stay living at home, where she continuelly gets used and abused not just by her mother but by her mother's constant supply of men..? Holley soon discovers that indecision can lead you down some pretty horrible paths...

ebonylovesreading ebonylovesreading Mar 15, 2011
wow awesome ! great begining really pulls you in =D 
                              Voted!
FatalBunny FatalBunny Mar 13, 2011
Great! I love this. It's very interesting and it sucks you in. <3
                              
                              I'm giving this a vote!
YoungForever_95 YoungForever_95 Mar 13, 2011
awwww... thats so sad! :(
                              I really like your writing style though,
                              Im going to continue in reading! :)
                              *Voted*
heyhannah92 heyhannah92 Mar 13, 2011
This is a good beginning!  Very sad.  I think you just need to convey her pain a little bit more by adding more details to make the reader connect more.  *Voted*
pitcher99 pitcher99 Mar 13, 2011
this is a really good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! p.s. I voted and I fanned you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ChemicalKid13 ChemicalKid13 Mar 13, 2011
Oh my gosh this is purely amazing, it pulled me in at the start ! You have a great writing style , and i love your description . It's perfect . you have my vote . (: .