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Bestfriend Bracelet

Bestfriend Bracelet

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loveyourself By loveyourself Updated Jul 14, 2012

Ethan and Madison had been friends for 5 years.Ethan was in love with Madison since the first day he laid his eyes on her. Ethan knew Mads was leaving without Madison knowing it and this broke the heart of Ethan. As they separate Ethan gave Madison something so she'd remember him every single day they would be apart. After 7 years they met again in college knowing that Madison became one of the popular students with Sarah (also their childhood bestfriend) and Ethan as one of the hottest player in the school with his bestfriend Dylan who became his friend when Madison left. What would Ethan do if Dylan made his first move on Madison? What would Ethan do if he knew Dylan was playing on her?

I really like where the story is going, it's not boring at all! I've actually added it to my library, I look forward to seeing more!
za_queen za_queen Jul 18
I don't get it. In the previous line u wrote first day of high school and here u wrote as a seventh grader.
daydreamer1977 daydreamer1977 Jan 21, 2011
I have read this chapter and have a few edits which I am sending you in a PM.  I hope this helps you and I did like the chapter.  Good job on the story so far.
daydreamer1977 daydreamer1977 Jan 16, 2011
A good start, I have some edits which you can choose to consider using or ignoring.  I will PM them to you.
                              Teen fiction is one of my favourite genres so its a pleasure to read.
                              Look forward to reading more soon.
ParamoreRules121 ParamoreRules121 Jan 16, 2011
It's pretty good for your first story! Voted :) *I'm your first comment and vote.. Happy dance*