Powerless

Powerless

951 Reads 97 Votes 7 Part Story
Bree Zhang By bubba_bree Updated Feb 13, 2017

A world in which eye color grants different powers; a world in which money and authority are dictated by the extent of those powers. 

Kyn Troyard resides in such a world, and he is a societal defect: his eyes are completely grey; he has no color. Living in the slums, he uses his wits to compensate for his lack of power as he attempts to protect the one person he cherishes in his world. His little brother. 

Little does he know, a series of events will spiral his life out of his control. Murders are occurring; disease is spreading; political factions from above are moving. And as for Kyn, he might just be playing a game of deception closely connected to upheaval of his world. 

A game that has rooted itself too deeply in disaster for him to pull out unscathed.

  • action
  • adventure
  • death
  • fantasy
  • mystery
  • thriller
sapphirewolf28 sapphirewolf28 Mar 19, 2017
PLEASE DELETE THIS BOOK! I HATE IT SO MUCH! AFTER I READ IT I COULDN'T BELIEVE THAT YOU WERE ALLOWED TO PUBLISH SUCH GARBAGE! PLEEEEEEEAAASE IMPROVE IT OR DELETE IIIIIIT!
WriteAMark WriteAMark Aug 19, 2017
Just saw this and can't believe it's been out for so long and I haven't seen it! *Shakes fist at Wattpad* I love how you're linking this in with your other works, such a great idea! 
                              This intro was really well-written! You have such a talent for words, great job!
TABLEAUXVIVID TABLEAUXVIVID Jan 03, 2017
Brilliant job here with the contrast of the lamp and the scavengers of the area. I do see some rhetorical devices which is always good to see!
-S-N-O- -S-N-O- Jan 21, 2017
This bit here is a bit roundabout. I think it could be shortened to that first sentence. If you would like to add more you could mention cold sweat, shaky hands/footing,  uneven breath, etc.
TABLEAUXVIVID TABLEAUXVIVID Jan 03, 2017
Adding the details of the moon does darken the mood. Creates this certain effect I cannot pin point. I do think I will enjoy this story!
blitzguy347 blitzguy347 Jan 17, 2017
Is it wrong that this made me want to go ride the train to catch a whif?