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The Eruption

The Eruption

934 Reads 9 Votes 1 Part Story
Ginger By ginger-silver20 Completed

Catalina and her family live right by a 'dormant' volcano. However, one day it erupts, and the results are devastating...

ElCidAtlas ElCidAtlas Feb 13
Wow, nice story, I felt there, maybe you can redo the part where she dies, maybe an escape, one or two more chapters, describing in the detailed way you write what she sees around. Great job!
ginger-silver20 ginger-silver20 Feb 12, 2011
@WhoaaNicki Oh, wow, you are so sweet! Thankyou so so much, I really do appreciate your 'full crazy fangirlness'! Thankyou thankyou thankyou times infinity!!! Your comments mean so much to me!
Wolfl0ver120 Wolfl0ver120 Jan 16, 2011
What color is her hair?:)Nice story,you have me wanting to read it over and over,like a real story should:)Good job.
maddy-bambi224 maddy-bambi224 Jan 16, 2011
Amazing story, so descriptive and I feel like I was really there. Good job!