this is a story about an adopted girl and her older brother that she loves... much more than she should.
btw my friends last name is o'callaghan and his brothers name is ron just so u know
a very good prologue... the 3 pages just swept by...good job :)
@YiXingXu wah. captivating prologue. wew. i continue reading. :)
i like it so far :) the prologue is better than some of the stories I've read on here before :P
@callmemusiclover13me sure, of course! and i'll hopefully get the chapter i'm working on posted within the next few days. ^.^
that's a cool prologue. Please continue. If you dont mind reading mine too? Although i just posted Chapter 1. I need some support. Please leave a comment and vote if you like it. Thanks...