Harry Potter and the Next Generation

Harry Potter and the Next Generation

47K Reads 157 Votes 7 Part Story
damember By damember Updated Aug 15, 2010

Join James Potter II in his time at Hogwarts.

kimathy kimathy Sep 17, 2011
All the lines of dialouge are very confusing. We don't know who is talking to who.
thecatsaregods thecatsaregods Aug 09, 2011
@eddiesdroidx I agree, it probably shouldn't but it really annoys me! Still I'm not criticizing your writing, it's very good. My favourite HP fan fics are always the future ones. I also agree with cmarykeane. Oh I feel like I'm criticizing I'm not! I love it! :)
cmarykeane cmarykeane Mar 20, 2011
this is really good! but sometimes i cant really tell whos speaking in the dialogue.. but other than that! i really like it!
damember damember Jan 18, 2011
@beatlesaddict  joy2thefreakingworld didn't insult the story. all they did was give me some constructiv critisism. besides I don't have all the reads because it's spectacular writing or a great plot; it's because I write about a popular topic and because its been up long enough. 
beatlesaddict beatlesaddict Jan 18, 2011
@Joy2TheFreakinWorldd Why don't you write a Harry Potter fan-fiction that has 21,000 views and show her how it's done then.
damember damember Nov 28, 2010
Please give me suggestions! I have no idea where to go with this and I feel awful for not posting in months!