Harry Potter and the Next Generation

Harry Potter and the Next Generation

47.1K Reads 157 Votes 7 Part Story
damember By damember Updated Aug 15, 2010

Join James Potter II in his time at Hogwarts.

  • albus
  • fan
  • fantasy
  • fiction
  • ginny
  • godrics
  • harry
  • hermione
  • hogwarts
  • hollow
  • hugo
  • james
  • lily
  • potter
  • ron
  • rose
  • weasley
kimathy kimathy Sep 17, 2011
All the lines of dialouge are very confusing. We don't know who is talking to who.
thecatsaregods thecatsaregods Aug 09, 2011
@eddiesdroidx I agree, it probably shouldn't but it really annoys me! Still I'm not criticizing your writing, it's very good. My favourite HP fan fics are always the future ones. I also agree with cmarykeane. Oh I feel like I'm criticizing I'm not! I love it! :)
cmarykeane cmarykeane Mar 20, 2011
this is really good! but sometimes i cant really tell whos speaking in the dialogue.. but other than that! i really like it!
damember damember Jan 18, 2011
@beatlesaddict  joy2thefreakingworld didn't insult the story. all they did was give me some constructiv critisism. besides I don't have all the reads because it's spectacular writing or a great plot; it's because I write about a popular topic and because its been up long enough. 
beatlesaddict beatlesaddict Jan 18, 2011
@Joy2TheFreakinWorldd Why don't you write a Harry Potter fan-fiction that has 21,000 views and show her how it's done then.
damember damember Nov 28, 2010
Please give me suggestions! I have no idea where to go with this and I feel awful for not posting in months!