Angelic

Angelic

1.9K Reads 141 Votes 12 Part Story
mountainlion2 By mountainlion2 Completed

Kita must defend the small town of Grabble from attack by a ruthless company after she kills the company men who killed her girlfriend.

  • action
  • adventure
  • angel
  • assassin
  • badassreads
  • fantasy
  • fiction
  • freethelgbt
  • gay
  • girlxgirl
  • kita
  • lesbian
  • lgbtq
  • military
  • omp
  • projectwomanup
  • sci-fi
  • villiansarepeopletoo
  • violence
  • women
SueHart2 SueHart2 Feb 05, 2017
Excellent chapter. You left a good hook, set the atmosphere, and suspense of the book. Good job.
SueHart2 SueHart2 Feb 05, 2017
Kita spun, twirled the shaft (omit and) striking another pair...
                              or
                              Kita spun, twiled the shaft and struck another pair...
                              She jumped (upon) (omit one) a table and swung...
                              Great action as usual. Very visual. Beautifully written. :D
SueHart2 SueHart2 Feb 05, 2017
The overall chapter is very good. The first chapter grabs attention.  Characters were presented with emotion, personality, and attitude. The plot was set. The pace excellent.  I would have loved to have a visual description of that worm. :D
SueHart2 SueHart2 Feb 05, 2017
They have no idea who they're dealing with. LOL. I love the building of suspense here. With the knowledge of her abilities, it makes you grin with glee too.
AdamDunsmuir AdamDunsmuir Nov 29, 2016
I didn't know that there was a third children of the emperor. I don't see children of the fallen angel