I Don't Believe in Fairytales

I Don't Believe in Fairytales

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RidesWithTheWind By RidesWithTheWind Updated Jul 26, 2011

When Suzie is attacked on the street by a so called, random attack. The cops soon finds out that this is far from a random attacker. With Matt her best friend and some one she has strong feelings for, she must start a new life. But the problem is, Matt's has to be her brother and nothing else or she blows her cover! While trying to keep her past life a secret and also trying to act like a completly different person then she was before, Suzie soon realizes that her life is far from the stories that she was heard as a child. There is no such thing as a Fairytale

TheAngellicDemon TheAngellicDemon Jun 28, 2011
Good story so far, the plot seems interesting enough. Got my vote.
HollyJBlock HollyJBlock Jan 22, 2011
You need to  work on a bit of grammar. I hate grammar but I study it anyway. Work on showing instead of telling, right now it's a random whirlwind of thoughts. @Lyareo stole the words out of my mouth.
                              I like your plot line. 
                              You get my vote.
RidesWithTheWind RidesWithTheWind Jan 22, 2011
@Lyaero Thank-you it means alot to have some-one edit my work. :)