A Glass Of Rosy Wine I Think?

A Glass Of Rosy Wine I Think?

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Shai By alishai Updated Jul 09, 2011

Julia was in a bit of trouble and that is how she met this guy name Henry and what she doesn't know yet is that he is a vampire prince. Then something happens and causes some trouble in his kingdom. They through a lot together to find something worth more than any gold or power in the vampire world. Read more of a glass of rosy wine I think?

alishai alishai Feb 27, 2011
@paigemae23 thanks for the comment i willl try to work on that
paigemae23 paigemae23 Jan 28, 2011
You need to go back and look at you tenses because they just switch randomly. I also think that she is thinking too much and too calmly. She is too objective where at that point I think her thoughts should be nearly incoherent. It is a good start though x
ilovejeremy ilovejeremy Jan 23, 2011
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