Living Wonderland

Living Wonderland

222 Reads 5 Votes 1 Part Story
Ella Lois By sonateamour Updated Jan 15, 2011

They say reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one. What is reality? A parallel world of the things that were never supposed to be? I am Denaira Chloe Soledad and I live in my own wonderland. Crazy right? You have to see and read the other side of the story. The one that's filled with sorrow and pain that I tried so hard to conceal. Welcome to my beautiful nightmare.

sonateamour sonateamour Apr 01, 2012
@halfaznallawesum Thank you. Great review. I wrote this a long time ago and it I'll look to the possibility of editing this. Cheers! :)
HeatherMcCorkle HeatherMcCorkle Feb 28, 2011
This is really interesting. It almost reminds me of a haiku poem~in a good way. It's reminiscent of Tim Burton. Very cool! I'd love your feedback on my story (and your vote if you like it): http://www.wattpad.com/1068305-the-secret-of-spruce-knoll  Thanks!
daydreamer1977 daydreamer1977 Jan 28, 2011
I liked this, it worked well, there for me was a few minor words which didn't read right.  Catched my eye, should for me have been- caught my eye.
                              
                              Other than that, the story flowed well and held my interest from start to finish.
                              
                              Sarah.
sonateamour sonateamour Jan 27, 2011
@missvindictive thank you, but you see, the dream is THE past. She is unaware of it. Her sister really died.
MsJaneDoe MsJaneDoe Jan 15, 2011
what I'm gonna say is so cliche but, !! you've got to upload more soon!!... or I'll squeeze the WHOLE story out from you XD
                              
                              Nice writing. And yup the cliffhanger endings do, in fact, work...