the truth about...me????

the truth about...me????

33 Part Story 16.2K Reads 427 Votes
diala By xodollitaox Completed

the world isn't what we always thought it is. there are secrets that are best kept private. Maya miller just found out that she could either bring the apocalypse or save the world.

xodollitaox xodollitaox Apr 03, 2012 07:56AM
@DacktDacmy loool i found on google couldnt make a really good one so i used this
DacktDacmy DacktDacmy Apr 03, 2012 06:46AM
Cool Story! My friend has a cover just like this! I'm going to tell her right now!
I luv this story i read it 2 times and never got old :D your a skilled writer
There are a few grammar errors, and there aren't proper indents when the subject is changed. With a bit of editing I think this could get on it's feet. Keep writing, never give up!
                              
                              Will you check out mine? It's called: ENTWINED. Thank you. 
nerdygirl nerdygirl Apr 28, 2011 02:19AM
@xodollitaox no problem, hope it helps others to enjoy the story, i might come back and read it once its edited, i just find unedited stories annoy me too much.
xodollitaox xodollitaox Apr 27, 2011 04:19AM
@nerdygirl thxs for teh advice and ill try and fix i up soon:D