Forfeit of Emotions (ON HOLD!) DO NOT READ THIS YET

Forfeit of Emotions (ON HOLD!) DO NOT READ THIS YET

1.2K Reads 19 Votes 3 Part Story
Cyden:) By 0oCydzzo0 Updated Feb 11, 2011

When 18-year-old Trisha Melandez moved to Regalia City, all she ever expected was a peaceful, dance-free summer... not until a key landed on her hands. A key that would lead her to a guy named Travis Villaruiz, the boy with a shadowy side and the one who's misunderstood. Due to some circumstances, they find themselves drawn to each other with such interesting twist to one's life story. 

What Trisha must show him is the joy of living and the pain of loving.

ThatDudeisaGirl ThatDudeisaGirl Apr 24, 2011
So far, it's good. I like how you have a knack on words. Just a few typographical errors. Gonna keep on reading:)
bloomelina bloomelina Mar 14, 2011
@Cydzz168 sis! btw, u have a typo... its prologue, not prolouge :D update soon too! ;)
0oCydzzo0 0oCydzzo0 Feb 28, 2011
@lostguitarpick 
                              hahahaha. thanks for reading this! and... nah, it okay. each one of us are busy too (including me! )
                              
lostguitarpick lostguitarpick Feb 28, 2011
I'm sorry it took so long for me to get to this (busy), but I have now. It's amazing, so thanks for telling me about it. All through the prologue I was thinking "yes! exactly!" It...it just spoke to me beyond what words often say. I love it <3
0oCydzzo0 0oCydzzo0 Feb 20, 2011
@thelionftw  thank you!!! I actually thought it sucks 'coz there are more greater authors out here.. so THANK YOU!!!!!
thelionftw thelionftw Feb 19, 2011
It's a pretty good start. The plot seems really interesting. Keep it up!