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Astronomy nerd By MysteryXX98XX Completed

"Everyday he'd show up, and I'd watch from afar; I'd admire his beautiful 
features or the ring that hugged his bottom lip; the way he'd sit by himself and stare at his drink; and most importantly, I'd watch the way his green eyes screamed in sadness and surrender every time they met mine."

(Book #1 of the Lifeless series)
{Declaimer: the second book in the series, Asha, is NOT a sequel of this one. They are completely different stories :) }

a/n: This is literally the second story I've ever written so it needs some editing. However, if you can bear unedited stories and happen to read this, then don't forget to vote or comment :)
Also, the story might sound cheesy to many people, but honestly I wasn't in a very good place when I wrote it. So if you don't like it, no need for hateful comments. Thank you :)

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Tsukaite Tsukaite May 21
Let's just admit, a guy havibg a lip piercing is like icing on top of a cake
holyygxd holyygxd Mar 03
I have a feeling he’s got an ed taking a sip after every bite gurll 🤷‍♀️🤔
I don't get how everything went so smoothly like that would NEVER happen in real life
chaimyass chaimyass Jun 04
tbh it would only make sense for him to be born at like 42 and already be a builder
amiwoo amiwoo Mar 03
wow i'd love to have simple essays like that, all based on facts i'd ace it
I currently have a night light on and im 23 and married 😂