a fourteen year old is trapped with her boyfiend in a life or death situation and she doesn't know if she'll make it out alive.
anyways if anyone actually likes this comment and check out my other books junior high just got worse...and ive been working on one with cherbear211981 its called new moon on the horizon
V_V well jeez give me a break im only 13!....but really thanks for the constructive critisizm! i am starting a new book its called junior high just got worse check it out!
Honestly no, the beginning was all right but the ending with the vampires, God and helping "lost souls" was too much. Just start a new story