killer

killer

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vampgirl1997 By vampgirl1997 Updated Jan 17, 2011

a fourteen year old is trapped with her boyfiend in a life or death situation and she doesn't know if she'll make it out alive.

vampgirl1997 vampgirl1997 Jan 29, 2011
anyways if anyone actually likes this comment and check out my other books junior high just got worse...and ive been working on one with cherbear211981 its called new moon on the horizon
vampgirl1997 vampgirl1997 Jan 29, 2011
V_V well jeez give me a break im only 13!....but really thanks for the constructive critisizm! i am starting a new book its called junior high just got worse check it out!
Scorpio4296 Scorpio4296 Jan 17, 2011
Honestly no, the beginning was all right but the ending with the vampires, God and helping "lost souls" was too much. Just start a new story