If I could go back in time.... *ON HOLD*

If I could go back in time.... *ON HOLD*

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Abby By my-heart-is-yours Updated Aug 23, 2011

Nicole's pretty much alone in the world. She has one friend, the boy next door, but that's it. after everything she's been through, with school, losing all her friends, and so much more, why would she want to be shipped off to a small town, surrounded by strangers? But then she meets Liam, and her whole world is turned upside down. It's a summer she'll never forget, but a summer only lasts so long....

my-heart-is-yours my-heart-is-yours Apr 27, 2011
@XoXGeekGirlXoX Thanks, yeah, I think I'll slow it down a little. thanks for the advice :) 
XoXGeekGirlXoX XoXGeekGirlXoX Apr 26, 2011
It's good, but everything is happening so fast! She barely knew these guys and she told them everything? I don't know.l.just seems slightly off to me, but all in all a good story!
my-heart-is-yours my-heart-is-yours Apr 26, 2011
@xBeautifulMonsterx Thanks :) and sorry, yeah, I'll work on that.
xBeautifulMonsterx xBeautifulMonsterx Apr 26, 2011
This is great so far. But one thing you need to do is to capitalized the first letter every time you start a quote.