The Legend Of The Mystics

The Legend Of The Mystics

17 Part Story 3K Reads 89 Votes
Melody Wilson By SecretMae Updated Feb 13, 2013 12:34AM

Three books connect three humans to a book of legends in another realm. Fates intertwine and five set out on a quest to save the Evergreen Kingdom. The three humans find their journey has led them to an unknown world with a legend in a book that has everything to do with their fates.   
    
    Along the quest to fulfill the prophecy, the mystics and the two helpers, Mae and Elliott, they meet along their way realize the once peaceful Evergreen Kingdom is under attack by an evil force. They will have to defeat the evil darkness that threatens to befall the kingdom, and save the princess-queen Aeolian's family name from an evil curse set years ago. Will all get destroyed in  this epic battle of good vs evil? Will the legend prevail truth? Leap into a story that will take you on a journey full of emotion and wonder with the turn of every page. 
    
    Written By: Melody Wilson ©Copyright 2012-All Rights Reserved

RabiaSadaat RabiaSadaat Jun 06, 2012 09:37PM
I like the plot and it captivated me. There were a few mistakes but you can easily fix them or get an editor to do it for you. Overall, good job. Voted. :)
SecretMae SecretMae May 26, 2012 03:56AM
@TheVixen Thanks. As for the editing grammar and spelling I don't always upload my edited chapters to here. I am going to publish and don't want to give away everything. ;-) Its okay for any hurried reads lol. I understand, not all stories tickle our fancy at times.
SecretMae SecretMae May 24, 2012 06:01PM
@LilyRedRidingHood @itsKristen Thank you two very much. It means a lot to me that you took the time to add your comments. I hope you continue to read the rest of the chapters and keep up with the future chapters I post. I would love hearing more of you two's views. Thanks again.
itsKristen itsKristen May 24, 2012 12:58PM
This is one of the better fantasy novels on this site. I can't give a good critique though because I'm not familiar with the fantasy genre. However, from reading this I thought it was very well put together and it had great descriptions.
SecretMae SecretMae May 23, 2012 08:28PM
@TeaAddict97 Can you tell me what type of mistakes? I am trying to correct them all lol. Thanks
I'll confess that I'm not a fan of fantasy, however, you are obviously a very brilliant writer, your description is great and it has a real natural flow! The characters are good, so well done! :)