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The_Deep By Deep4141 Completed

The chilling effect of winter and the harsh glare of the snow........having kept you cooped up in your house for too long, how does it make you feel? Don't you crave for the freshness of the outdoors? But what if the frosty outdoors hold more in store than you bargained for?

Deep4141 Deep4141 May 09, 2011
                              Ha's my signature all right ! I'm a story-teller basically, so even my poems form narratives of stories !!! I'm glad u enjoyed it ! ;-D
erica_drury erica_drury Mar 27, 2011
I like it though I got lost at one point though I read it again and it made more sense. Being tired may have a lot to do with my confusion lol
Deep4141 Deep4141 Feb 25, 2011
                              LOL, I'm glad u see my point of view ! As a poet, I try to infuse different emotions in my poems...... a linear approach only  will hardly be ever visible in my works !  =)
Deep4141 Deep4141 Feb 17, 2011
                              The 'unknown' if u like.......actually it's situations like this that bring out a person's inner demons, or fears, to the surface, coz everyone has some fear or the other hidden away in the depths of their being. I hope u liked the poem.  =)
Deep4141 Deep4141 Feb 04, 2011
                              He he......a little care to ensure uniformity goes a long way ! Thanx for the feedback !  ;-D
belle_limbsky belle_limbsky Feb 04, 2011
:o   Whoa...totally chilling. The lines aren't all miss-matched like learntolove has said, which I admire. It's hard to make such a great poem and a long one as well. I congratulate you at your amazing poem. :3