We have many thoughts that lie deep within our minds,
away from the light of everyone's sight.
Thoughts that scare us, that disgust us,
that angers us and those that can break us down.
@JoannaNestoridi Oh please do...what did you find wrong ?
The same things I've said before apply here as well.
Do you want me to point out a few possible mistakes I've noticed?
It's a good one too.
Voted (just like your other one!)
Hmmmmm very intriguing it evokes a deeper emotion and begins with apowerful symbolism. There is meanings and connotations in this prose which can be seen by many different people in many different ways! Kinda like my poem "You'veBeen Ripped Off!" please vote for it! I am voting for this for sure :)