Kidnapper's Son

Kidnapper's Son

41.2K Reads 1K Votes 14 Part Story
Kate By turtlesrock1212 Completed

ATTENTION: This book is not good. Read at your own risk.
I have written another book similar to this one. My other book is better. Go check it out instead. It's called Falling In Love With My Kidnapper's Son. :)

Please can you people read my book, it's not perfect but please give it a chance, it's a request.
Marcy_Young Marcy_Young Oct 17, 2016
I agree , and you need alot more details like instead of " jeans and a blue shirt " you should put " i grab some light blue skinny jeans with a flowly flower print blouse , and matched it with black ankle boots ."
orange5665 orange5665 Dec 18, 2016
Why is there so many i's.......i little kid MUST have wrote this....smh😒😒😒😠😠😩😧😧
Screwyousuckers Screwyousuckers May 01, 2016
I know a Jase but it's spelt Jace he has blonde hair and golden eyes anddddd ...... He isn't real and lives in the world of shadowhunters ........ * sigh *
Greekgoddess31 Greekgoddess31 Oct 27, 2016
Is this a real song that has been on the radio or whatever or did you make it up
teenagedesperate15 teenagedesperate15 Sep 18, 2016
Not trying to be rude but don't use "I" a lot in the story it just gets annoying. The repetitive use of "I" makes the story seemed rushed.