Kidnapper's Son

Kidnapper's Son

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turtlesrock1212 By turtlesrock1212 Completed

ATTENTION: This book is not good. Read at your own risk.
I have written another book similar to this one. My other book is better. Go check it out instead. It's called Falling In Love With My Kidnapper's Son. :)

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Also your naming details about and outta no where u say he's taller than me
Its great but with a few grammer fixes it would sound better.
Don't tell us every little thing she has to do and ur grammar could use some work
dianashale dianashale Aug 31
No hate but u use periods wayyy to much and it's annoying. There no even complete sentences
Please can you people read my book, it's not perfect but please give it a chance, it's a request.
Marcy_Young Marcy_Young Oct 17, 2016
I agree , and you need alot more details like instead of " jeans and a blue shirt " you should put " i grab some light blue skinny jeans with a flowly flower print blouse , and matched it with black ankle boots ."